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0ilk cümlenin olduğu kısımda and den önce nokta koymasan sanki daha hoş olacak birde is olması gerekmiyor mu o cümlede başlarda
benden bu kadar bro -
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0this means we are alone. olacak lonely adj
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0anything değil de anyone desen daha hoş
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0yazz özelden panpa sıkılıyom zaten
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+1and we dont try to know them either. daha hoş olabilir
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0@4 haklı. benimde lk gözüme çarpan oydu. daha da bilmiyom ingilizcem bitti bu kadar
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0when our parents are getting divorced, it is more likely that we move into another home. Also, it is more likely that we have to start a new school.
This means we will be lonely. we will have no friends, and we wouldn't try to find new friends because we wouldn't trust anything.
What's more we will have difficulties about adapting the new environment. we don't know anybody and we can't try it to either. this is a real problem.
edit: çok profesyonel olmasın diye senin yazdıklarını değiştirmedim sadece hataları düzelttim. yoksa ingilizcen çok iyi değil söyleyim. çok fırın ekmek yemen lazım -
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0.koyup and demek nedir lan ?
edit:okula ailecek mi başladınız amk ?
edit2: this is a real problem for us yaz daha güzel olur -
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0this "means" olmalı "mean" değil, alone dersen daha iyi olur.
we dont trust "anything" değil "anyone". mal.
this is "the" "main" problem olsa daha iyi.
more likely ne allasen? ilk cümle komple yanlış. ne demek istediğini bile anlamadım. -
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0When our parents getting divorced more likely we move to another home. And more likely we have to start at a new school.
This means we are lonely. We have no friends. And we don't try to find new friends because we don't trust anything.
And we had difficulties about adapting new environment. We don't know anybody and we don't try it either. This is a real problem.
When our parents getting divorced more likely we moving another house. And more likely we have to start a new school.
This mean we are lonely. We have no friends. And we don't try to find new friends because we don't trust anything anymore.
And we had difficulties about adapting new environment. We don't know anybody and we don't try it to either. This is a real problem. -
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0when our parents get divorced most likely we move to another house (veyahut place, city, town... ). and more likely we have to start at a new school.
this means we are lonely. we have no friends. and we don't try to find new friends because we don't trust anyone ( trust anything ingilizcede söylenmez).
and we had difficulties about adapting to the new environment. we don't know anybody and we don't try it to either (burda ne demek istedin panpa ? kimseyi tanımıyoruz ve ?). this is a real problem
home yerine house --> home daha fazla yurt, ocak anlamında kullanılır
lonely = kimsesiz, yapayalnız, terkedilmiş
alone = yalnız
hangisi senin düşüncene göre daha uygunsa onu kullan. -
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0anlam yönünden çok gibko lan söyleyim düzelteyim diye başladım son cümlede bıktım sildim. daha düzgün bir şey yaz bence önemliyse
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0"got divorced" olacağadı
uğraşamam şimdi tamamıyla -
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0@16 komple düzelttimya panpa