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    panpalar gör topal kısa bi essay yazdım taşşağınızı yiyim bakın bi çok önemli bi hata var mı?


    Scientists are finding out new things continuously, especially in the field of medicine because it is about human healthy. They solved lots of diseases, but there is lots of diseases waiting for solve, like cancer, AIDS etc. I hope, they will make new medicines and new treatment ways. I have some idea about this.

    First of all, they will make artificial organ so they can change all organs that have problem. They tried to cloning sheep, and were successful about that however it has lived only six years. Normally it should have lived twelve years. Following years, they cloned many animals that are horse, cow, cattle, and cat. Nowadays it is not allowed to clone human but it can be possible in the future.

    Moreover, these days’ scientists can see your DNA, and they can guess your health when babies are at womb. Maybe 50 years later, they will have cured all diseases for unborn babies, and they will change babies’ DNA. I watched TV that they was changing babies’ DNA, and created perfect soldiers.

    Furthermore, Robots are being used in some operations by doctors so they used it in a hearth surgery last year. I hope so, they will operate with robots all surgery in the future. It is healthy.

    Finally, technological development is great, but it can be problem for ecological system. Because of this we should use technology under the control
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    ingilizcem ii ama okumadım. durumumuz yoktu okuyamadım
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    up
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    @2 http://inciswf.com/1305674001.swf
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    söle bin
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    3.satırın sonundaki they was değil were olacak...
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    @5 yazdım işte amk
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    bizde ii diye bir not yok ama benim dc olur mu
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    bugünlerin bilim adamları diyeceksen nowadays' yapacan onu, türkçe düşünme these days diye.

    bi bunu gordum scan edince.
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    kardeş belliki opinion essay yazmaya çalışmışsın ama tak gibi olmuş. genel olarak çok hata yok.ama saat geç oldu. ben gidiyom
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    @9 eyv panpa
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    benm ingilizce bb panpa kusura bakma yardımcı olamıcam
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    @10 eyv panpa çok baştan savma yazdım zaten
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    sadece ilk 2 cümlende 40 hata buldum uğraşıp yazamam ama daha çok yolun var.
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    o son paragraf hiç olmamış amk,bi daha yaz
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    @14 o kadar mı amk
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    okumadım ve eksiyi bastım.
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    moralim bozuldu zaten kmple baştan yazcam
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    cloning ships ne lan koyun demek istedin heralde
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    @19 evet panpa dalgınlığıma gelmiş düzelttim eyv
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