ingilizcenin anasının amını sikmiş panpalar

@18 kanka görmedik be editi pardon amk

dayanamadım okudum. çoğu cümle kuruluşun bile yanlış amk. nerde okuyon sen. yanlışlarını da söylemicem kudur amk

@1 öncelikle başlık cümle olmamalı puanını ordan direkt kırarlar
secondly:giriş paragrafına adam akllı bir şey yaz amk ne bu ön sevişme olmadan sexin zevki çıkmaz genel birşeyler yazacaksın ki merak uyandırasın
for example:bir soru cümlesiyle başla why peaple need sex? mesela bu sadece bir örnek
edit:do you know what i'm saying(çaktın mı köfteyi anlamında kullanabilirsin bunu da arkadaşlarına hava at)

başlıkta sıkıntı yok şimdilik bence ama ilk cümledeki it is include education facia. orayı silip including education yazacaz

@23 o dediğin slang olur adam essay yazıyo amk sokak dili olmaz

in the world yerine all around the world yazmamız lazım. cümle globallikten bahsediyo çünkü

aslında başlarken de until nowadays yerine recently kullansak perfect tense cümlesine uygun gitmiş oluruz

face to face education is beneficial or not?

techonology has improved recently and almost everything has changed, including education. today, you can reach any information all around the world. An answer to "face to face education is beneficial or not?", is that face to face education is more beneficial than any other education types in terms of student-teacher interaction, student-student interaction and teaching strategies in the classroom.

Firstly, face to face education is definitely better because it gives the opportunity of interaction between the student and the teacher at the environment of school. clasrooms are the most suitable places for students to learn anything because there is always a guide for students to ask in need. Students can get immediate feedback from the teacher in the classroom and feedback is the most important part of the learning process.

@26 panpam yemin ediyorum çok teşekkür ederim lan

Secondly, interaction between students is essential for learners. Student can learn from their peers. The teacher can use group work in the classroom. students will be more motivated and will feel less anxious. instead of rivalry, there should be cooperation between the students.

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@24 panpa iki sene öncesinde biz yazdığımızda hoca başlığın cümle olduğunu görünce paragrafın hepsini çükülüyordu ondan dedim tabii şimdi sistemleri nasıl onu bilmiyorum
@1 sonuç cümlelerinde as a result,in yhe light of these observations we can say that gibi kalıplar da kullan
işe yarar

And lastly, face to face education is useful because it is directed by a teacher who has the knowledge of teaching. Teachers use many strategies according to the needs of their students. they are the professionals of their field so they are more experienced than any other student. teachers work as a director in the classrooms and this is very adventageous for the students.

face to face education is beneficial or not?

techonology has improved recently and almost everything has changed, including education. today, you can reach any information all around the world. an answer to "face to face education is beneficial or not?", is that face to face education is more beneficial than any other education types in terms of student-teacher interaction, student-student interaction and teaching strategies in the classroom.

firstly, face to face education is definitely better because it gives the opportunity of interaction between the student and the teacher in the environment of school. clasrooms are the most suitable places for students to learn anything because there is always a guide for students to ask in need. students can get immediate feedback from the teacher in the classroom and feedback is the most important part of the learning process.

secondly, interaction between students is essential for learners. students can learn from their peers. the teacher can use group work in the classroom. students will be more motivated and will feel less anxious. instead of rivalry, there should be cooperation between the students.

and lastly, face to face education is useful because it is directed by a teacher who has the knowledge of teaching. teachers use many strategies according to the needs of their students. they are the professionals of their field so they are more experienced than students. teachers work as a director in the classrooms and this is very advantageous for the students.

to sum up, face to face education is helpful for students; they can learn from their teachers and also from their peers. The teacher helps students as a guide and director in the classroom so that learning process becomes easier to handle.

panpam hepsii birleştirip bi daha düzemlemeye çalıştım. çok uykum var anca bu kadar yazabildim.

bak şimdi sana hocaların neye puan verdiğini söyleyeym.

öncelikle düşünceni belirtip bu düşünceyi en az üç alt düşünceyle desteklemen gerekiyor. her destekleyici alt düşünce için bir paragraf gerekiyor. ve sonuçta yine hepsinden kısaca bahsetmengerekiyor. sen aklına ne geldiyse yazmışşsın. öyle olmaz.

sabah erken uyanıcam yazıyı bır kes daha gozden gecırır eklemeler yaparım.