ingilizceden anlayan panpalarım bakın bii

dear xxxx xxxx,

i invite you to for my birthday.my birthday is on saturday at 7.00 pm at the 'blue club'.i and my friends having to dinner.it would mean so much to her if you would join us for a small celebration in her honor.we are finally ready to entartain.
we are looking forward to seeing my birthday.
regards.

Bir kere yazının hepsi küllüm yalan, noktalama işaretleri ve küçük harf büyük harf bu ne aq ? I'lar nerede ?

Dear XXX - Semi formal
Hi or Hello XXX - informal

I would like to invite you on my birtday party, so that is gonna be at 7.00 pm on Saturday at the Blue Club. Also I have dinner that day. If you joined my little celebration, I would be appreciated to see you there. Fortunately, we are ready to host you.
We are looking forward to see you on my party.

Best wishes & kisses & hugs - informal
Best regards etc. - formal

hızlıca yazdım sana ama, sen bence önce yukarda ne demek istedin ben onu cidden anlamadım. aq tekrarlıyorsun duruyorsun, hem çağırıyorsun hem hazırız diyorsun, E yarak heralde hazır olcan hazırlamaya gereksiz bi sürü gib var.

I invite you to for my birthday.My birthday is on Saturday at 7.00 pm at the 'Blue club'.Me and my friends having to dinner.It would mean so much to me if you would join us for a small celebration in my honor.
We are looking forward to seeing my birthday.

BUNU YAZDIM GONDERDIM AMK

Amk o kadar adam yazmış ama kendilerine göre yazmış. Şimdi burda sana 2 paragraflik davetiye yazarım ama onu dinleyecek o hocanı mal yerine koyup bunu ben yazdım diyip hocanın gözünde itin zütu kadar şerefin kalmayacak. iyisimi sen kısa ve öz yazılanlardan basit bir şey derle ve zütür ver ödevini.

Dear XXX ,

You are invited to attend the birthday of the most handsome , charismatic ( kendini tanimlayan bir iki sifat ) man , which will be held on 20th October at 7 PM at the Blue Club. Seeing you in my birthday is already a gift for me but I'd appreciate more if you bring something for me too. ))))

See you

adam davetli beyler. cumartesi gibiş var desene bin.

tut mir lead panpa ich spreche nur deutsch

ich bin deutsche mein heil yazmalısın en başa

i invite you to my birthday party. my birthday party is on saturday at 7.00 pm at the 'blue club'.i and my friends are going to have dinner.we are finally ready to entartain.
we are looking forward to seeing you for my birthday party.
regards.

it would mean so much to her if you would join us for a small celebration in her honor.

bu cümleyi anlamadım ki kontrol edeyim.

ama şöyle bişi olabilir:
if you join us,it will be highly appreciated.

I invite you to my birthday which is going to be on Saturday at 7.00 pm at the 'Blue club'.Me and my friends having to dinner.It would mean so much to me if you would join us for a small celebration in my honor.We are looking forward to seeing you at my birthday.
Regards.

dear xxxx xxxx,

i invite you to my birthday party .my birthday is on saturday at 7.00 pm at the 'blue club'.me and my friends are having dinner.it would mean so much to her if you would join us for a small celebration in her honor.we are finally ready to entartain.
we are looking forward to seeing my birthday party. byod (bring your own drink) biraz espri kat olaya
regards.

saçmalamışsın dostum.

Dear XXXX XXXX,

Please accept this invitation of my birthday. I'm looking forward to have a formal dinner. It means so much to me if you could join us for a small celebration for friendships sake. Hopefully it is gonna be entertaining.
Saturday 7.00 pm @ Blue Club
Best wishes.

bu kalıptan bişeyler türetiver. ben gidiyom amk.

@16 and yazarak mı birleştireyim yoksa virgül mü koyayım? türkçeyide unuttuk amk : (

@15 internetten alıntı yaptım fena gribim oturup yazsam bu kadarda yazamam gerçi 2.haftam okulda. gözünü seveyim düzelt su hatalarımı

1- ilk 2 cümleyi birleştir. kısa kısa cümleleri noktayla ayırma amk azcık complex yapı yap.

2- me and my friends olcak o

3- son 2 cümleyi de birleştir

4- her her dedin sonda my birthday diyosun amk

peki , burada yazan "her" kim ?
"my birthday" demissin sonunda ?

@3 haklı.

@11 pin seviyesindeyim, daha uygun bir şey yazabilrsen sağlığına duacı olurum (:

ccc sözlük baharı ccc hadi binler herekese inci ruhunu gösterelim görmeyen kalmasın

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bu ne amk ilkokul mezunu musun , cumle nokta cumle nokta. hem kotu not alirsin hem de davet ettigin gelmez...